All she really needed

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Where have you been hiding?

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she couldn't help but agree
with the moment and the movement
and the height of their activity

Excellent!

I agree. This is really excellent!
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Just...wow. Amazing. If I could write like this, I'd quit my day job and try to make a career out of it.
hey this is awesome and i could do with what you've described above lol. thanks for sharing... love your work!

Thanks, Lea :) Your words mean a lot to me, especially because I admire the way you wrote so much, hehe. I was actually pretty hesitant about posting this in the first place, but now I'm kind of proud of it just because it's the first piece I've written in awhile. Thank God for the 5 word challenge, huh? Hahaha. I'll try to write more in the future, but you can never force writing no matter how 'good' your last piece was. :P

Wow.. thank you. I don't think I'm good enough to quit my day job for this, but if you think so, then all I could really say is thank you, you're too kind. :)

Thanks! lol did you mean that you wouldn't mind having what I wrote about? Maybe that's all you really need too! Hahaha, but thanks again :D

Such a picture you painted! Well written. Way to be physical and introspective at the same time.

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