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I really enjoyed that. The parallel between lovers and expression by use of punctuation was very creative. I also liked how it read like a sentence.

Lovely.

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That was really nice. :)
Cin, this is so beautiful.

I never want there to be a last line for your writing!
Awwwwwwww.
I absolutely LOVE this.
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Awesomeness.


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i liked this a lot, esp since it's been a while for me to feel enough to write like this again. sigh.

great lines.:) i liked this, especially:

"letting them somehow slip in between the parenthesis of our mouths as they travel line by line from our doubled-over hearts into our burning ears."

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i really enjoy reading your posts! i love this. your writing is great :)
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adore it
Thanks everyone. I appreciate all your lovely comments ;)
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i really enjoyed the metaphors
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love this. isn't it great when you write something that so exactly captures the essence of being human, in whatever moment you're describing. and you do it in a way that's at once deeply personal and specific to you, and at the same time, speaks to thousands and millions of the rest of us..

you rock.
Thank you! I know what you mean -- I love knowing that other people can relate to what I've written whether I've personally gone through it or not. It's nice to know that it connects people in more ways than you realize.
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I totally agree with this. I love it! <3 I feel that exact way it's what I want to say but can't You write beautifully.

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